LOVE IN THE NATURE
She spread her locks the night
Her face was beaming with light
She was sitting on my right
Our hugging in the dark was very tight
Her contour of body I felt
To kiss her on forehead I knelt
I found my lips to be at melt
Her cloth entangled into my belt
The Sun was about to go down
We forgot if it was dusk or dawn
Our love not at stop; it was on
A chain of light was coming from the town
The wind was blowing slowly
She was kissing me softly
I was counting her hair knowingly
Seeing us, birds chirped happily
We were playing an unknown game
This was like trying a wild animal to tame
We both were warming ourselves in love's flame
At the dead of the night we came
_________________________Sohrab Alam Ansari
Thank you Vikram Ji....
ReplyDeleteyour imagination is appreciable.. but one thing which I couldn't understand is that .. in first para you are saying that 'Our hugging in the dark was very tight' and 3rd para you are saying 'Seeing us, birds chirped happily' .. how can be possible that bird will see you in dark and chirp .. and many more which i found unbelievable ... I hope must be something beyond that .. if it is like that, then please explain...thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteActually it is dark over there but because of a chain of light and her beaming face birds chanced to see us...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! :) Moreover so romantic! I like it! :))
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Roland!
DeleteSuperb bhaiya
ReplyDeleteThanks Asutosh
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